[Week I] Topics Sentences: My "just popping out of my head" topic :D

TOPIC:
"The automation of the world substantially improves the efficiency of daily activities, however at the same time, it significantly brings the users to social isolation."

Supporting Ideas:
1. Technological development periodically promotes a more
practical and comfortable life to the users through the
invention of printing press and the internet for instance.
2. On the Contrary, the term 'global village' is introduced
to the world as the automation continues to progress and
indirectly isolates the users socially.

Conclusion:
"To some extent, the technology leads us to a better living and somehow, it also drives the users, us to be just sitting comfortably on our chairs in our room, resulting in lack of direct communication among individuals