Tuesday, 15 December 2009

[Week XI] Argumentative Essay

Mars is a fascinating planet since it has similarity to our home, Planet Earth, which the only difference is that its size is about to be half the radius of Earth. Planet Mars is also one of the two planets that are close to our Planet Earth alongside the moon. People want to colonize Planet Mars so it will solve our overpopulation problem, but some people are against the idea of colonizing for several reasons. Supporters also state that going to Planet Mars is a good way to learn something new by studying and exploring Mars, but some do not agree to establish a manned flight to Mars and they state Mars is a lifeless planet that it is not worth exploring a ‘dead planet.’ Some people also interested if Mars still has living organisms or inhabitants but, until now, there are no further evidence that there are living inhabitants in Mars.

As stated above, some people want to colonize Planet Mars. They say that our planet is being overpopulated so they think that having another planet as home would solve this kind of problem. They even state that they can even go and colonize other planets with Mars as their first planet to colonize. However, it is impossible to colonize Mars because it lacked oxygen which is impossible to breathe and the planet’s atmosphere consists of almost entirely carbon dioxide and less oxygen. Even with the current technology we have now, it is impossible for scientists to create oxygen in a lifeless planet. This is not just like the futuristic movies we watched in TV such as the Jetsons and video games like HALO; we’ll die due to lack of oxygen. Stating about colonizing other planets is also impossible, planets such as Jupiter are too far for us to reach and quite dangerous. Our spacecrafts cannot travel further and going deeper into space would be a suicide.

On the other hand, there is a possibility that man can establish flight to Mars due to the advanced technology we possessed today. Few years ago, NASA has established an operation to go to Mars and it was a success. Following the 1992 failure of the Mars Observer orbiter, NASA launched the Mars Global Surveyor in 1996 and it was a success. With the current technology, NASA may be able to launch an even more advanced rocket for flight to Mars. Some scientists argue that sending people to Mars can be dangerous because of an accident that cause a rocket to explode in space killing most of the astronauts piloting the rocket few years ago. That accident will not happen again as long as scientists are very observant with the rockets. So it is possible for man to establish flight to Mars.

Many supporters of manned travel to Mars argue that the planet might still have life living on it and they are excited to see real life Martians. We saw in movies that there are life forms on Mars such as ‘Planet 51’ and the famous movie ‘Aliens.’ However, it is not true; there is no life on Mars. Although there are evidences suggest that the planet used to be inhabited by unknown living organisms, it is still not clear since it only shown that it is more inhabitable than it is today. If there were living organisms on Mars, I would not dare to travel there because we do not know what they do or what they will react to see us humans.

It should be known that there are possibilities that man can travel to Mars at last. We have developed our technology and it has been advanced into a whole new level, so why not use it to help to construct a far more advanced rocket for the flight? With the current technology, scientists can establish a more advanced spacecraft that would be easy enough to be piloted by new and veteran Astronauts. People will be able to experience travel in space and see their home planet, Earth, from the rocket and learning the mysteries of space which will be a very good experience for them. So in my opinion, it is worth the expense and risk to make a manned flight to Mars.

[Week XI] Argumentative essay- FIFA should make a new rule to limit FC's Transfer Budgets

FIFA should have made a limitation for all football clubs' transfer budget. Big signings which happened recently can explain why. Many clubs lost its stars because of that certain players feels more interested in the amount of wage that they will be receiving if they moved to some clubs that offers more generous new weekly wage more than the player received in their current club. In this essay, Im gonna talk about all the reasons of why FIFA as the highest in the football hierarchy should make the transfer budgets limitation, and also the effect of some big signings to some clubs.

First of all, why should we be agreed on FIFA's proposal to make that limitation rule? It is to make the football world to become more balanced. It of course will become boring if we knew that one club is definitely will become a champion of a certain football league caused by its superiority in its financial power rather than the skills of its staffs and players.

Second, we are going to talk about the effect of those big signings to some clubs. In this case Im gonna take two examples from three giant clubs, first, it's AC Milan, we can see that the club really do misses its key player, Kaka Izecson to be back on the pitch, it is really obvious that Kaka played a vital role in AC Milan, and his departure made a significant downgrade in AC Milan position in the Italian Serie A. Second it's Manchester United, the Red Devils seems like have lost its fang along with the transfer of the best player in the world if not in the universe, Cristiano Ronaldo, Ronaldo have been a soul in the Man. Utd play scene for the past 5 years, and now that he's gone, so does the Red Devils reputation of "cant stop scoring". And the third one is the prime suspect, it's none other than the spanish giant, the Los galacticos, it's Real Madrid, a club which currently is having the best financial power in the world. Signed AC Milan's Kaka for 85 million euro, and also took Manchester United's Cristiano Ronaldo for 100 million euro, Real Madrid is now has become a genuine threat for its arch rival Barcelona to be reckoned with.

So in conclusion, FIFA should really make a realization for the proposal of the transfer budget limitation. It is indeed interesting to see lots of star players gathered in one club, but is it really intereting to actually realize that what makes your club a loser is none other than because there is a club with much stronger financial power?

[Week XI] Argumentative Essay - We should legalize Marijuanna

There are a lot of studies that show us how dangerous the cigarettes are. There are a lot of campaigns that try to tell us to stop smoking. Even in the cigarette boxes, the smoking room, etc there is a warning for the smokers. However instead of smoking cigarettes, it's better for us to smoke marijuana.

First of all, Why it's better for us to smoke Marijuana than smoking cigarettes? Isn't Marijuana is more dangerous than cigarettes ? The answer is no. It's just an assumption of groups of people that doesn't know anything about Marijuana. Marijuana is totally different from what we thought. We know that by smoking it is the same as we killing ourselves slowly but not Marijuana. There is no evidence that we can die because of Marijuana. There is no solid proof that shows us how Marijuana can kill us.

How about the addictiveness rating ? Isn't Marijuana addicts us ? Yes, Marijuana makes us addicted to it, but not as addicted as smoking cigarettes. Maybe you doesn't believe what is said,but there's a research that already finished comparing the addictiveness level between Marijuana and Cigarettes. Apparently, smoking smoking cigarettes are 10 times more addictive than smoking Marijuana. There is an evidence that show us about it. In Amsterdam there is a constant number of people who is smoking Marijuana which is 35.000 people, and the number hasn't went up for some years, instead of going up, the number goes down slow but sure.

Maybe it's hard to believe it, but that's what the fact says. So why should we ban Marijuana ? It is better for us to legalize it than ban it because by doing that, it will be another income for our country while we push the blackmarket that sell illegal marijuana out. Which one do you choose ? Marijuana that is sold at the blackmarket that only thinks about profit rather than the quality, or Marijuana that is sold by the government who will uphold the quality over the price? The government are there because the society chooses them. That's why they should provide the best for the society.

[Week XI] Argumentative Essay: Beyond the Pleasure of Coffee


As we all know, coffee is one of the most popular drink in the whole world that has been founded many years ago. It was so famous until we notice the name of coffee break in many formal occasions. At that time, people are taking break to enjoy some cookies while drinking a cup of coffee. While in everyday life, coffee is often made as breakfast companion. Yet, we seldom observe what benefits or negative effects of coffee for our health which at most that we know that after we consume coffee, it will refresh our body and lost the sense of sleepiness. But before we enjoy the euphemism of coffee, let us look what’s behind it.

First of all, According to the medical analysis, there some xatin chemical compounds contained in coffee. This compound derivative includes caffeine, theophylline, and teobromin in chocolate. Among these chemical compounds, caffeine appears to cause stimulation of the central nervous system (brain), respiratory system, and the system of blood vessels and heart. That is why no wonder every drink coffee in a reasonable amount (1-3 cups), our body will feel refreshed, excited, think faster, and not easily get tired or sleepy. These positive impacts make people hard to get rid of drinking coffee. However, those benefits do not apply to someone whose have a job that requires precision, neatness, and accuracy of counting, such as mathematics, drawing or painting. On the other hand, coffee is more appropriate for those who study the social sciences or memorizing. You can drink it about half to one hour before you begin to study or memorize.
Caffeine also caused a number of health problem such as the increase of the risk of Parkinson`s disease, the increase of anxiety, heart rate, stress, stomach hindrance, disrupted sleep and breathing problem for infants, and caffeine dependence syndrome. The general characteristic of coffee addiction is fatigue or tired, not enthusiastic, and sleepy all the time if not drinking coffee for one day. The reasonable amount of drinking coffee is 85-200 mg or 1-3 cups of coffee. However, drinking coffee on 250 mg at once can cause health problems, such as heart beats faster, anxiety, insomnia (difficulty of sleeping), nervous tremor (shaking hands), and even nausea to vomiting.

Secondly, drinking coffee is also dangerous for people that suffer hypertension (high blood pressure) because the chemical compound contained on coffee could cause the blood pressure increased rapidly. Beside of that, coffee could also increase the bloodstream to the kidney which causes the increase of urine productivity. So, it is no wonder that when you just finished a cup of coffee, you would feel the urge to urinate. Coffee could also caused osteoporosis, where calcium will released from the urination. Five milligrams of calcium lost for every six ounces coffee consumed. Yet, this lost of calcium can be overcome by consuming 2 spoon of milk or make espresso latte. Mixing coffee with alcohol is also not good especially with people who have live disorder and coffee with cream mixture should also be avoided the excessive calories.

Last but not the least, the caffeine contained in coffee could increase the risk of heart disease. Although it is still not clear how the amino acid essential could interfere our heart, it has proved that this substances often injuries in various layers of the arteries and then it become a place for fat acid and calcium stacks. This result can shift of the blood vessel walls (arterioklerosis). Because of that it would be better to not drinking coffee, especially for those who have a high risk of heart disease. Even if it must, it would be better for us to drink only one or three cups a day (the standard for the European is 3 to 5 cups a day). It also not before going to bed.

Overall, it is true that coffee was really enjoyable for us to consume it regularly. But despite of all of the pleasure of drinking coffee, there are bad many impacts that we might have even not instantly felt by us. Many people are aware of these bad impacts, however it would not stop them to drink coffee because they are already addicted of it. Drinking coffee sufficiently would not harm our health, but it always good to be aware of things that would impact us because of coffee.

[Week X] Group survey - do we deserve better facilities in binus international univ.

  1. how long you've studied in binus?
  2. enjoy using the facilities binus gives?
  • yes, of course
  • pretty much it..
  • not really
  • not at all
3. do you think you deserve some facilities to be better?
  • yea..
  • no, its cool.
4. if you think you deserve better facilities, its based on......?
  • money i've spend to get to this university
  • what international university should give.
  • both of the statements above...
  • other...
5. if you could make one of the university's facilities better, what would it be??
  • better internet connection
  • better music studio
  • better smoking room
  • better classroom
  • other...
6. do you think binus should add more facilities?
  • yes
  • no
7. name one of the facilities you want binus to add!

8. do you think binus can effort the facilities you want binus to add?
  • yes
  • no
9. so, do you agree that binus student deserve better facilities?
  • absolutely
  • it is okay already.
  • whatever



Thursday, 10 December 2009

[Week X] Group Questionnaire, Gadget Freak!

1. Gender:

2. Age:

3. How Many Gadgets Do You Have ? (Including in Your Home)
(o - 5); (6 - 1o); (11 - 15); (15>).

4. How Many Gadgets are With You At The Moment?
(o - 2); (3 - 5); (5>).

5. How Many Cell Phone Do You Have?

6. Which is the most Important Gadget For You?
(HP) (Internet Router)
(Lappy / PC) (Game Console)
(iPod) (Other: ______________)

7. Can You Live Without it?
(Yes) (No)

8. How Many Hours You Usually Spend While Using Your Gadgets?
(<12 Hours); (>12 Hours).

9. Are You Completely Aware Of Most Of The Features In Your Gadgets?
(Yes) (No)

1o. How Often Do You Buy Yourself a New Gadget?
(Every Week) (Every 3 Months) (Every Year)
(Every Month) ( Every 6 Months) (Every 2 Year)
(Other:____________)

Monday, 7 December 2009

[Week X] Survey - Group

[Week X] Dec 7 to Dec 22, 2009

Survey Group

Editing of previous posting: punctuation, capitalization, not grammar.